Sep 22 2008

Short piece

Published by at 14:00 under Poetry,Topic

Last night, I dreamt
the sea shaped by hurricanes;
each wave a shark’s tooth.

Actually, dear readers, while I’m enjoying putting this up in the name of new content I’d appreciate not only feedback but grammatical correction if it’s required. I’m not 100% certain that I have it right.

Reading: “Cultural Amnesia” – Clive James
Listening: “The Point Of It All” – Amanda Palmer

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6 responses so far

6 Responses to “Short piece”

  1. # Pennyon 22 Sep 2008 at 14:58

    Which worry did you have about grammar? It looks fine to me.

  2. # Tim Hamiltonon 22 Sep 2008 at 15:15

    @Penny: Thanks! I was uncertain about the semi-colon. It looked correct, but I had a sneaking suspicion that something was wrong.

  3. # Heathon 22 Sep 2008 at 16:11

    No – looks right to me.

    What’s the new Amanda Palmer album like? Yet to nab one…

  4. # Tim Hamiltonon 22 Sep 2008 at 16:27

    @Heath: Marvellous, thank you.

    Who Killed Amanda Palmer is really good. I’ve been following for blog, etc. so I had already heard a few of the tracks before I got the album. Well worth the wait to get the whole thing though. I’m rather hoping to see her next time she makes it out here too!

    If you haven’t done so, check out YouTube for videos she’s made for songs off this album.

  5. # Randomon 22 Sep 2008 at 21:31

    Dude, it’s poetry. Grammar is merely one of the tools of the trade! :)

    But serious, it looks fine to me.

  6. # Tim Hamiltonon 22 Sep 2008 at 23:52

    @Random: True, I just wasn’t certain about the semi-colon. ;)

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